January 5, 2012

The Horse and the Stag fabel - rewritten by me :)

A race takes place
At the willow today,
Between Stag and Horse
One brilliant, one brave.

Into the meadow,
Across the stream,
Around the bridge,
And back again.

Your mark, set, go!
Fox made it a scene.
All cheered for Stag,
Yet Horse took the lead.

Around the first bend
Laid a fallen tree.
Stopped Horse in his Tracks
While Stag took the leap.

Horse caught up
With anger and power.
He barged into the stream
But Stag sailed over.

They made their way
Around the last bend
Stag sailed over the tree
Horse went around again.

In the final stretch,
Stag took the lead
Everyone cheered
While Horse stood angry.

Stag got Lila,
The girl of Horse’s dreams.
So he walked away in shame
Without saying a thing.

Then he saw a strange man
“Hello sir, what are you doing here?
Looking for some dinner?”
Horse asked with a sneer.

Horse told his story
Of Stag and all.
“But that is such a long walk.”
The man said to stall.

“Oh, I can take you
To this evil deer.”
“I’ll ride on your back
Only if I can steer.”

A moment waned on
As Horse hesitated to think
But said “anything you want.”
With his freedom at stake.

The steel bit was cold
In Horse’s tender mouth.
The man saddled him up
And the pair headed South.

When Horse saw Stag,
He took a quiet step back.
Hidden by the brush,
The man aimed at the buck.

When all was done,
He took the man to his kill.
Horse had finally won
And asked the man to remove his steel.

The man just smiled,
And to Horse’s horror he replied,
“Your new name is Lyle.
Now help me get my dinner back to site.

“Revenge will harness you,
As I am now enslaved
By the same bit of evil
From the deed I did that day.”




1 comment:

  1. I really enjoyed this poem. Original, artistic, realistic and ultimately an astonishing piece of great poetry. Had a well written flow to it. =)

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